I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Jackson I like your topic on the work that you are doing it looks good and your WALT is god to next time you can put a full stop next to gods and the end of the other stuff that you did but the rest of the stuff that you did look good.
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Hi Jackson
ReplyDeleteI like your topic on the work that you are doing it looks good and your WALT is god to next time you can put a full stop next to gods and the end of the other stuff that you did but the rest of the stuff that you did look good.
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