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Friday, September 22, 2017

te ngahere

walt about the ngahere the rakau the karaehe the manu and the risks to the forests

Thursday, August 24, 2017

100 word challnge 45

Week 5   #45



World Events for your writing
I’m sure you won’t have missed the events in Barcelona, Spain this week or the devastation caused by the mud slide in Sierre Leone and the violence in Charlottesville, Virginia. The prompt this week uses the emotions that the media has shown us.

Latest prompt
As I said at the top of this page, the events around the world this week:

… as it came rushing towards us we…
One day there were lots of people at the beach, when suddenly there was someone yelling run, run, run tsunami. It is coming really fast.Everyone ran to the wall behind the beach and hid.There was lots of screaming and yelling. People were running all over the place. It was mayhem, 1 minute later water was splashing all over the place,  people were yelling. It was a nightmare. People were drowning and dying.The lifeguards were trying to help people. But then it all came to an end, 10 people died though, luckily I didn’t die, it was sad.

Saturday, August 19, 2017

the magic man

One day there was a magician in the street.He was as ugly as a troll His nickname was troll.but he was awesome at magic. People kept making fun of him one day he got mad.It was so so so bad. So he to went to the white house ask Donald Trump     “TELL THE PEOPLE NOT TO MAKE FUN OF ME.”   “Ok I will” said Donald Trump.”
I was outside and did a little fart I got out my wand and turned it into a tornado. Suddenly it turned to fire and gas. Donald trump came out and said “Pew wee what's that smell”.I said “because Donald trump is a dump.No I am not said donald trump get out. Then the fart tornado suck up Donald trump “NOOOOOO” screeched Donald trump.I'm leveling said the magic man. The white house broke  into pieces.Donald yelled get out of america now.I became a hobo in new zealand.

But then someone gave me 2,000,000 dollars I was rich. I bought a mansion I did magic. But then I was poor again oh no . I made a tornado again My pram flew into the air.then I sold all my magic things  for my rent.I brought my wand back and made lots of money with it.but then the  police found out and tried to arrest me.They put me in jail but I kept my wand and broke out of jail.there was a guard that helped me get out.I got in my getaway bugatti vreon.It was as fast as a cheetah we got away .

Friday, August 18, 2017

100 word challnge


My name is mr.seal.I live in the sea with lots of other animals. Some of the animals a funny like mr fury.some are dumb like mr vontia. Some a mean and douchebags like mr idol he thinks he’s so famous. But no one really knows him.I went to the animal circus and saw mr fury telling jokes.but when I went to do my act i got kicked out.So I went to my house I saw mr fury on the couch he told me “I have a special circus Aw Aw Aw.it was cool.

Friday, August 4, 2017

create your own kayak

Create your own Kayak
Instructions

Step 1
Create your design
*Screenshot the finished imagScreenshot 2017-08-01 at 9.51.23 AM.png

Step 2
Describe your design
I.e. “I have chosen a blue Slalom K1 kayak with a blue base and a red outline. I have chosen to place 5 yellow stars at the front of my kayak and a large triangle at the back.”
I have chose the  descente  c1 it is black and red it has a red circle


Step 3
Describe who would buy your design
I.e. “I believe this kayak would be liked by teachers who want to get into kayaking. The paintjob is simple, but still pretty cool looking.”
I think kid who want to kayak should have this one it is a simple paint jop and not to crazy


Step 4
Share your screenshot and your descriptions on your blog.
With a Walt and Task description.
I.e.

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100 word challenge 3

100 word challenge




I was in my Lamborghini going 200 miles per hour the all of a sudden I hear cop.So I pull over he comes up and said do you now why I am giving you a ticket I said of course NOT.He walked back to his car to write the ticket.But then I speed off.The sunroof was open then I suddenly terns dark and a lighting bolt goes right in you my car there was a flash I was a big bang I was so so scared.I was the worst I wish it did not happen

Thursday, August 3, 2017

the ridge

      The Ridge       
Make a copy, rename and start your writing on your copy.


Learn
Click on the url below and watch the short clip.



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Before you start writing
Think about how you would describe the setting both on the water and once Danny is on the ridge.

How are you going to create atmosphere in your writing?

What sort of language are you going to use to create tension and suspense.



Create  
WALT write a descriptive piece of writing through the eyes of Danny.

Success Criteria
We need to focus on these things
  • Full stops, capital letters,
  • Paragraphs
  • We need to follow the sentence tools for our opening paragraphs.
To start with you will write a description of the first scene, now move to when Danny lands on the edge of the lake and then move onto the ridge. Use the show not tell technique to create thoughtful writing. You are writing through the eyes of Danny. Create suspense and tension as he rides the ridge.                              


Go to this padlet The Ridge and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similies and metaphors.

Share
Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blog.




HI my name is danny.I am doing one in a lifetime thing.On my bike.I am one of the only one to do this.I can see some massive rocky mountains there is small ones too.I reach the sand I get out of my row boat and get me bike.It is as light as a feather.I get one the sand and hop on my bike and then ride up to some rocks.There is no turning back I am on my bike going.I go up a little bit of a hill.The rocks are as grey as fog.I go to a lake is really blue.I jump into a little bit of water and it wets my wheels.It made it a lot more slippery.I got harder to ride.But it is ok.I ride on to a big bolder.I 180 on another rock and ride.I ride over a log.it was a little bit hard but it is worth it.It goes on another rock and then I jump onto another then on to some rocky sand.it was not as hard to ride on then the first lot of sand.there is water going under a rock like a waterfall.It was so so cool.I was be be coming the end of the day but I carry my bike up a big big mountain.I go down at 100 mph I was so fast.then I ride onto the grass and then there was a fence I front flip over it.I bike on to the sand and lay down