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Thursday, April 13, 2017

beyond the lines

Beyond the Lines             
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Click on the url below and watch the short clip up to 3 mins 16 seconds


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Before you start writing think about the setting and imagine you are there.
The opening sequence of this film swoops across the Normandy landing beaches.
It is to here that we are taken, first we see the eye of a scared soldier and then a group of soldiers huddled together on transport vessels ready for battle.   Once discharged they race up the beach – it is at this point that we realise that something isn’t quite right.
Two young boys are caught up in the battle surrounded by pale, paper-faced soldiers.



Create  
WALT write a narrative through the eyes of one of the children or one of the soldiers.

  • Think about how the men on the boat would have been feeling as they huddled on the boat on their way to their impending doom.
  • Think about words to describe the battleground, what you see, smell, taste, hear. Try to use words that create the mood.
  • Now…..Write a first person narrative through the eyes of one of the children or one of the soldiers..



Go to this padlet Beyond the LInes and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similies and metaphors.

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Beyond the Lines

28 July 1914, I hop on a boat  and we are all crowded in it. We go on a trip for 4 days and then finally we get there.  The boat ramp goes down bang, bang, bang, goes the gun. People are getting killed as soon as they come out. BOOM a bomb drops and we all run and hide behind barbed wire.

There were two little kids and they were so scared they came behind me.  Then my friend  got killed. I run bang , bomb,drop, bang, bang, guns fire but  they miss me. I was scared I shot people and they charge at me. I get my knife and kill them. Bang my best buddy goes down and I run. Then bang I get shot, I get transported back home and I go to hospital.



Friday, March 24, 2017

dlo

WALT we are leaning to add 3 or more number by first makin
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g up that add up to ten

Thursday, March 23, 2017

Arctic Circle

Arctic Circle             
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The Arctic Circle animation.  In a desolate landscape one man's survival depends on the single fruit tree by his house.  One day a strange box arrives and gives him a special power.  Will he be able to control his urge to keep the box from his neighbour?


Learn
Click on the url below and watch the short clip


Before you start writing think about the following questions:
What is happening? Where is the man? Is he human, how can we tell?  Why is he there on his own?  What option will he choose?

Create  
WALT create an internal monologue for the main character.

We know we have done this when:
We have written what the character is thinking as he discovers what the box of magic is able to do and decides what he will do now?


Go to this padlet Arctic Circle and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similies and metaphors.

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One day I come out of my little house and start to wind my tree then an apple starts to grow. Then it is ready so I grab it and eat it. But then I look around and there is a box so I go over to it and touch it. It aletrice shocks me I touch it again and my arms go orange then I walk backwards and hit my tree, it grows  apples. So I eat one
Then I go back to the box.I move one step and the box moves then I run and it moves faster. Then I jump in front of it and jump on it and it goes in me. Then I get up then I walk and it eats my feet then I fall it eats my body then my head. I die then my naber come out and and the same thing hapinds the end











Arctic Circle             
Make a copy, rename and start your writing on your copy.

The Arctic Circle animation.  In a desolate landscape one man's survival depends on the single fruit tree by his house.  One day a strange box arrives and gives him a special power.  Will he be able to control his urge to keep the box from his neighbour?


Learn
Click on the url below and watch the short clip


Before you start writing think about the following questions:
What is happening? Where is the man? Is he human, how can we tell?  Why is he there on his own?  What option will he choose?

Create  
WALT create an internal monologue for the main character.

We know we have done this when:
We have written what the character is thinking as he discovers what the box of magic is able to do and decides what he will do now?


Go to this padlet Arctic Circle and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similies and metaphors.

Share
Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blog.


One day I come out of my little house and start to wind my tree then an apple starts to grow. Then it is ready so I grab it and eat it. But then I look around and there is a box so I go over to it and touch it. It aletrice shocks me I touch it again and my arms go orange then I walk backwards and hit my tree, it grows  apples. So I eat one
Then I go back to the box.I move one step and the box moves then I run and it moves faster. Then I jump in front of it and jump on it and it goes in me. Then I get up then I walk and it eats my feet then I fall it eats my body then my head. I die then my naber come out and and the same thing hapinds the end






























panui pukapuka





Walt: We are learning to find and use relevant parts of the text to help us answer questions accurately. 







Thursday, March 16, 2017

something Fishy

Something Fishy             
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Learn
Click on the url below and watch the short clip

Create  
WALT create an internal monologue for the main character.


We know we have done this when:
We have written what the character is thinking as she moves through the fantasy ocean.

Go to this padlet Something Fishy and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similies and metaphors.


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One day I was at the laundromat. Suddenly one of the washing machines glowed in my eye it was a bright as the sun. Then I go over to have a look. I  opened it but no water came out so I touched it. My hand was still dry so I thought it was safe to go in.


I went in and there was socks as fish there was red ones blue ones yellow ones and purple ones. Then I see a whole bunch of fish. Then I see an octopus it was blue with pink and orange stripes and a turtles that are  dark blue and light blue and grey. They we as cool as the sun. then I see a goldfish I case it I almost catch it  so I trey again. I catch it then  It got away so I look around I see a big shark. Then I  make a surprised face and I blow bubbles.


I go as fast as I can my heart is beating I swim so fast and I have no breath.I see the door I look back and the shark is there . so I go I then I jump out I curl up like a ball. Then the pants come out so I try to touch it but the someone said behind me I think those are ming I look back and is a shark. I was so scared and freaked out.

  

dlo


This is my DLO the Walt is We are learning to solve addition and subtraction problems where the number  are easily related to near doubles hope you like it
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