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Tuesday, June 27, 2017

Wednesday, June 7, 2017

matariki around the world

wal about how matariki is celebrated around the world

i learnt that other people like celebrate matariki around the would    

Thursday, June 1, 2017

mokihi



wal about mokihi and how they are made

we went to a matariki thing link and watched a video on mokihi
next we go a choice on crating a thing link or slide show to share our learning.

my favourite slide is mokihi facts pg.1

Wednesday, May 24, 2017

energy


titanium slow writting

Titanium         
Make a copy, rename and start your writing on your copy.


Learn
Click on the url below and watch the short clip.



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Before you start writing Watch up till 1.15, think about what has happened? What has caused this? Why?



Create  
WALT write a descriptive piece of writing through the eyes of the boy.

Success Criteria
We need to focus on these things
  • Full stops, capital letters,
  • Paragraphs
  • We need to follow the sentence tools for our opening paragraphs.
To start with you will write a description of the first scene, use the show not tell technique to create thoughtful writing. You are writing through the eyes of the boy.                              These are our sentence tools today -
Sentence 1 - If, if, if, then
Sentence 2 - 3_ed
Sentence 3 - 2A
Sentence 4 - Where opener
Sentence 5 - Adverb opener
Sentence 6 - Short sentence
Sentence 7 - Tell: show 3 examples;
Sentence 8 - Short sentences
Here are some examples

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Go to this padlet Titanium and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similies and metaphors.

Share
Once this is completed you can publish it on your personal blog.



If I didn't touch the school grounds, if I stayed home, if I wasn't stupid then I wouldn’t have this superpower. I was scared ,worried about my friends and furious about what had just happened.  I am sitting near a door, when a teacher looks at me and closes the door. I am lonely in the ruined corridor of my school  Silently I put my hat on as I walk out the door. I take my hands out of my pockets; scrunch my hands and my face; I was so mad. I put my hands together and run.