Monday, August 29, 2016

Dream giver

Dream giver

WALT use adjectives and similes in our writing.

One day I was giving out dream’s and then I gave one to a girl she wanted to be a ballerina so I gave her a  ballerina dream see was as happy as can be then I gave a boy a dream that was an astronaut And the was so happy the he smiled then I give a boy an baseball dream and then another boy a miusic it  was like he was playing the drums .  Then a egg fells and bracks .Then the astranort went in the book and a dragon comess to him dut I save him.The the boy wakes up.then I go out.THE END


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