I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wow Jackson, the rap kept me focused on your work which was informative. Pity about the rapper's 'f' word in your presentation.. you'll learn to discriminate better when you hit Yr9. Meanwhile, you nailed the notes on preserving food (enjoyed the images too).
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Wow Jackson, the rap kept me focused on your work which was informative. Pity about the rapper's 'f' word in your presentation.. you'll learn to discriminate better when you hit Yr9. Meanwhile, you nailed the notes on preserving food (enjoyed the images too).
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