titanium slow writting

Titanium         

Make a copy, rename and start your writing on your copy.

Learn

Click on the url below and watch the short clip.

Titanium

Before you start writing Watch up till 1.15, think about what has happened? What has caused this? Why?

Create  

WALT write a descriptive piece of writing through the eyes of the boy.

Success Criteria

We need to focus on these things

• Full stops, capital letters,
• Paragraphs
• We need to follow the sentence tools for our opening paragraphs.

To start with you will write a description of the first scene, use the show not tell technique to create thoughtful writing. You are writing through the eyes of the boy.                              These are our sentence tools today -

Sentence 1 - If, if, if, then

Sentence 2 - 3_ed

Sentence 3 - 2A

Sentence 4 - Where opener

Sentence 5 - Adverb opener

Sentence 6 - Short sentence

Sentence 7 - Tell: show 3 examples;

Sentence 8 - Short sentences

Here are some examples

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Go to this padlet Titanium and start writing your ideas, words feelings adjectives similies and metaphors.

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If I didn't touch the school grounds, if I stayed home, if I wasn't stupid then I wouldn’t have this superpower. I was scared ,worried about my friends and furious about what had just happened.  I am sitting near a door, when a teacher looks at me and closes the door. I am lonely in the ruined corridor of my school  Silently I put my hat on as I walk out the door. I take my hands out of my pockets; scrunch my hands and my face; I was so mad. I put my hands together and run.