I was ready, I got in my Blocart, pulled the rope. As I exited the driveway I saw cop’s. I decided to pull the rope real hard. I went on 2 wheel’s round the bend. I saw the light’s turn on. As I got further away the cop’s kept catching up. I got a good distance away so I ducked into a bush and got out. As I got out I saw the cop’s they were right behind me. I thought, “I am not going to be able to get my cart out of here” so I ran and found a guy ready to leave on his motorbike. I pushed him off and rode off. The cop’s were still behind me. I thought “I can’t get away” I pulled the throttle as hard as I could and I was off. I got as far away as I could
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, September 23, 2019
The great escape
Part of writing we have to write 150 word's. So I am going to post 1 chapter with 150 word's
Chapter 1
I was ready, I got in my Blocart, pulled the rope. As I exited the driveway I saw cop’s. I decided to pull the rope real hard. I went on 2 wheel’s round the bend. I saw the light’s turn on. As I got further away the cop’s kept catching up. I got a good distance away so I ducked into a bush and got out. As I got out I saw the cop’s they were right behind me. I thought, “I am not going to be able to get my cart out of here” so I ran and found a guy ready to leave on his motorbike. I pushed him off and rode off. The cop’s were still behind me. I thought “I can’t get away” I pulled the throttle as hard as I could and I was off. I got as far away as I could
I was ready, I got in my Blocart, pulled the rope. As I exited the driveway I saw cop’s. I decided to pull the rope real hard. I went on 2 wheel’s round the bend. I saw the light’s turn on. As I got further away the cop’s kept catching up. I got a good distance away so I ducked into a bush and got out. As I got out I saw the cop’s they were right behind me. I thought, “I am not going to be able to get my cart out of here” so I ran and found a guy ready to leave on his motorbike. I pushed him off and rode off. The cop’s were still behind me. I thought “I can’t get away” I pulled the throttle as hard as I could and I was off. I got as far away as I could
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