I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Halo I like your work that you did on greek myths it look good next time you can put some more full stops at the end of the stuff that you have put on there and in the words that you have on the blog post but the other stuff is good.
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Halo
ReplyDeleteI like your work that you did on greek myths it look good next time you can put some more full stops at the end of the stuff that you have put on there and in the words that you have on the blog post but the other stuff is good.
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