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titanium slow writting

Titanium         

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Learn

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Titanium

Before you start writing Watch up till 1.15, think about what has happened? What has caused this? Why?

Create  

WALT write a descriptive piece of writing through the eyes of the boy.

Success Criteria

We need to focus on these things

• Full stops, capital letters,
• Paragraphs
• We need to follow the sentence tools for our opening paragraphs.

To start with you will write a description of the first scene, use the show not tell technique to create thoughtful writing. You are writing through the eyes of the boy.                              These are our sentence tools today -

Sentence 1 - If, if, if, then

Sentence 2 - 3_ed

Sentence 3 - 2A

Sentence 4 - Where opener

Sentence 5 - Adverb opener

Sentence 6 - Short sentence

Sentence 7 - Tell: show 3 examples;

Sentence 8 - Short sentences

Here are some examples

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If I didn't touch the school grounds, if I stayed home, if I wasn't stupid then I wouldn’t have this superpower. I was scared ,worried about my friends and furious about what had just happened.  I am sitting near a door, when a teacher looks at me and closes the door. I am lonely in the ruined corridor of my school  Silently I put my hat on as I walk out the door. I take my hands out of my pockets; scrunch my hands and my face; I was so mad. I put my hands together and run.

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basket boats

Story Review

WALT: summarise the main ideas of a text.  

Answer all these questions

Title:Basket Boats

Author:Jill Macgregor

Summary of the story:

How do you make the boat or earth paint?

• First they cut long pole of green bamboo  from the forest
• They scrap the outside of the bamboo of so they can weave it easier
• Then they soak it in water

Facts: (Write something that you found wow and interesting).

Wow:

• It is cool how they float in water

Interesting:

• I was interesting  how they make them

Vocabulary (Choose 2 words you didn’t know, google them and write their definitions here)

1.dusk

It mean the darker stage of twilight.

2.moored

It mean  by attaching it by cable or rope to the shore or to an anchor.

somalia

Somalia           

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Not far off the Somali coast one of the big Vestel cargo vessels is taken over by pirates! Within a split of a second the ship has a new captain, the soup is gone as well as the cargo itself. Will our Veterans be able to strike back?

Somalia

Before you start writing think about the setting and imagine you are there.

Somali pirates take over a huge cargo freighter at sea. Things don’t look good for the crew, until the pirates start to investigate the cargo—Vestrons! Engage!

Create  

WALT write a narrative through the eyes of one of the crew, or robots.

• Describe the setting in detail.Think about words to describe the situation, what you see, smell, taste, hear. Try to use words that create the mood.
• Now…..Write a first person narrative through the eyes of one of the crew or one of the robots. How you are feeling when the boat is invaded by pirates.

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Somalia

One day I was just doing the same thing as yesterday just driving my  ship and drinking coffee yum. Suddenly I hear a bang something hits  the ship. Then I  hear yelling “Look out the back window.” I say “oh no pirates are coming  now.” I just stand there because there is nothing to do. They go into the kitchen. They come into where I am.  

The captain of the pirates comes up to me and says “Do you know who I am? I am the new captian. Give me the keys, THE KEYS !” He put the key in and turns it.But he does not know that it makes the robot go on. Then the pirates opened a shipping container but there is nothing in them.

Then  the robot sneakily climbs right out of the container and goes behind the pirates back. One spits on one pirate and the robot scares and trips the pirates over.

“Boo” another robot scares a pirate.  Than one robot goes into the bit where the captain drives the boat. The robot grabs 2 pirates and throw them out the door. Then he taps the pirates leader on the back and makes him look out the window. All his people are are on the ground.  Then a robot takes the  hat and key and gives in back to the real captian.