We know we have done this when we speak clearly and confidently.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, August 31, 2016
Monday, August 29, 2016
Rio rainforest
Rio rainforest
I am a black panther I come out of a bush it is as green as a green apple I am going to race a cheetah it is not faster then me I think I think I am going to bet it.we get ready to race 3 2 1 go i am in 2nd the cheetah is in first by 2 seconds then I pass him then we go round the corner then I am in 2nd no I am in 1st then we run another 10 km then we get to the end and I win the cheetah slows down and he stops then I slow down then I am you say bolt no I am a panther no I am you say bolt.then I run to the cliff with all the other opticians.
Dream giver
Dream giver
WALT use adjectives and similes in our writing.
One day I was giving out dream’s and then I gave one to a girl she wanted to be a ballerina so I gave her a ballerina dream see was as happy as can be then I gave a boy a dream that was an astronaut And the was so happy the he smiled then I give a boy an baseball dream and then another boy a miusic it was like he was playing the drums . Then a egg fells and bracks .Then the astranort went in the book and a dragon comess to him dut I save him.The the boy wakes up.then I go out.THE END
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